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Post by zeke on Aug 18, 2011 21:46:47 GMT
The Basics
†» Name: Zekeriya Lamberti †» Alias: Zeke †» Age: 16 †» Gender: Male †» Siblings: None
Rank: Civilian of Amestris // Chimera
Appearance
Zeke has blond hair and golden brown eyes, which is wierd because he is Ishvalian decent in turn gives him dark skin. Floppy cat like ears and claws makes it painfully obvious that he's a chimera. He wears a orange and black jacket, a orange head-band, tan pants, and orange and black sneaker-like shoes. He wears a pair glasses, even though he doesn't need them, to make him look a bit more confertible around crowds. He glasses also makes look like he can't defend himself to catch his opponents off their game. Zeke is about 5 feet 6 inches with a build of a trained soilder.
Personality Zeke generally portrays an attitude of cool and calm collectiveness, though he shows agressive tendencies when threatened. He generally acts indifferent to people around him, preferring to associate only with his friends and family. However, he cares deeply for all souls, taking pride in his work as a "hero" because he is able to protect others, and makes it his mission to destroy as many terrorests as he can. In battle, he is surprisingly calm, rarely surprised by the actions of his opponents. He can analyze his opponents movements, and react accordingly. He knows when he is outmatched, however he will never give up.
History
Born due to a love affair between an Amestrian State Alchemist, and a Xingese Rebel who gave up their old ways. They lived happily, even with the disdain that was held towards their family. That changed however when Zeke reached ten. Xingese assassins killed both his parents on orders from the emperor. Thanks to his parents, he managed to escape undetected. Zeke wandered the streets until he was taken in by an alchemist. Because of the uproar that would raise from having Zeke in their home, they simply used the pretense of hiring him as a butler for their youngest daughter.
Five years later, he disappeared without the families knowledge. He had left to confront the emperor. His plan backfired however when he was captured by members of the rebel faction. For the next few years, he was experimented on. They planned to turn him into a chimera by using a common house cat. The reason for these experiments was to create an assassin that would actually stand a chance against the emperor.
During this time, Zeke found out that it was his mothers family that killed his parents, not the emperor. Through ingenuity and dumb luck, he managed to escape. Realizing the state of the world, Zeke decided to use his new "abilities" to aid Amestria, hoping to protect his new family who he had left five years prior.
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By Others: Zeke
Roleplay Example
Zeke found an inn quickly after he arrived to Central. It seemed safe to spend the night. The chimera went inside and asked the inn keeper the price for a night. The desk clerk told him that it was twenty crowns. "Twenty crowns?! My stay will not be long, apparently." The truth is, Zeke didn't have enough money to spend more than a week in Central if that's the price. "I'll stay just long enough to get a few missions done." He though to himself.
About Yourself
Name: Zeke Gender: Male RP Experience: 3 years Activity: I'll be on in my free time
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Post by Edward Elric on Aug 21, 2011 22:46:25 GMT
First off, thank you for applying! There are, however, a few issues with the application that staff wishes to address. Nothing particularly major but we would like to take a closer look at a portion of your character's history.
The first error is actually a contradiction between something stated in your appearance and then your history:
Is he Ishvallan or Amestrian/Xinganese?
The next few are mostly due to the fact that we simply don't have enough information in the history. What was the mother rebelling against? So far as we know, there was no Xinganese rebellion. We know that deals more directly with the character's parents not the character himself but seeing as it leads to their deaths and that is directly related to the character and a great deal of the rest of his back story, we would like to know.
That leads into another issue. We need more information on the 'experiments' leading to the character being a chimera. The only known successful chimeras were made by the Amestrian military. We would also like a run down of his 'abilities' as stated.
This we won't be too strict on, since there is no real guideline on the application, but your RP sample is quite short and doesn't really give us a feel for how you RP the character, if you have, say, a post from another site that's a little longer that would do just fine.
All in all, it's actually very little compared to what we usually have to harp on, trust me XD. But, if you would please look into those issues, we will be happy to look at the application again immediately!
Thank you!
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