Post by whiteknight on Feb 18, 2010 4:12:02 GMT
(feel free to criticize ^^' i haven't watched FMA in awhile or made a Application in awhile)
Name: Raphael Linewood
Alias: The White Knight Alchemist
Age: 17
Gender: male
Rank: State Alchemist
Raised in Dublith by his mother and father, Raphael had a older brother Leonardo and older sister Catherine. his father was more machine than man having been in a accident several years back when he was a State Alchemist, every limb was auto-mail but still worked hard as a farmer. They were very poor and tried very hard to make money, Raphael learned how to play the violin and sat outside everyday playing a old violin on the street outside his house. As he grew older Raphael's older brother Leonardo started to teach his alchemy, like most things Raphael became obsessed with it and was always reading and studying it but Leonardo was always better. He soon acquired a job playing his violin at the local pub, people were amazed to see this 12 year old child playing like a professional. One day he decided to make a gift for his Father for his birthday, he proudly made a perfect bust of his fathers head and rushed home to give him the gift. When he reached his house a crowd of people were around it, smiling as always he simply thought everyone was there to wish his father a happy birthday but sadly he was wrong. Leonardo had killed their parents and gravely wounded his sister in a attempt of human transmutation . With tears running down his face Raphael ran away. Out in the country side he found his brother casually walking down the road with the cruelest smile on his face, Raphael was terrified of him, Leonardo said five words only "Get me when your ready" then Raphael fainted. Several years later at 16 he had practically learned everything about alchemy, still working at the pub playing music to earn enough money to hopefully be able to buy a auto-mail leg for his older sister, Raphael decided to take action and went to central with his sister and took the state alchemist exam. He almost failed but passed thankfully, he had made a slender suit of armor in a split second
but secretly he thinks it was because of his fathers record which allowed him to pass. Currently whenever he works he always uses his suit of armor to fight, it makes him feel safe and brave. His sister owns a small Inn in town which she was able to buy with help from Raphael, they make a decent enough living and Catherine refuses to get auto-mail for reasons Raphael will never understand. two other people work there, twins named Sally and Sarah. Raphael is working most of the time as a state alchemist mostly since he doesn't have anything else to do.
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The sun shone brightly as Raphael wandered around the town, he was looking for a nice place to take a seat and maybe play his violin a little. Smiling and waving at people as they walked by politely, Glancing over at a fruit vendors stand he saw a kid snatch one "hey!" the fruit vendor shouted "don't worry i'll get him!" Raphael quickly said chasing after the boy through the maze of alleyways. After several minutes Raphael caught him at a dead end "oh come on, you have to pay for that" Raphael said with a tired smile, the kid did the unexpected and through the fruit beaming Raphael in the forehead then caught the fruit and ran away while he was still in shock "...i did not see that one coming" Raphael said in disbelief blinking his eyes, walking back rubbing his forehead Raphael gave the fruit vendor money for the stolen fruit then continued in the direction he originally was walking -yikes... that could've really have gone better- Raphael thought with a grin as he walked. He decided to stop near the side of the road then popped open the instrument case and picked up the violin and started to play a cheerful tune skillfully -i love this ratty old violin... i could make it better but why ruin a good thing- Raphael thought
Name:...i'm sorry i don't feel comfortable enough to tell you my name yet.
Gender: Male
RP Experience: 1 year, almost 2
Activity: i get on about everyday of the week unless something important comes up
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The Basics
Name: Raphael Linewood
Alias: The White Knight Alchemist
Age: 17
Gender: male
Rank: State Alchemist
Appearance
Raphael has messy blonde hair, left eye is brown while the right is blue and both seem to look right into your soul warmly. is an average height at 6'1 and has a nice smile, skinny boy but stays in the best shape he can, you'll see him smiling most of the time. Raphael often wears a white dress shirt with the sleeves rolled up and front unbuttoned with a baby blue tee shirt on underneath, dark blue jeans and brown loafers when he isn't working. He wears black wristbands on each wrist with a alchemic symbol on it for quick and easy access. Every so often he'll scratch his head while he's talking to you. He tends to blend into the background and most don't notice Raphael. while he works he wears a slender white suit of armor that has a long bright red scarf wrapped around the armors neckPersonality
Nice and kind, awfully shy and mind wanders a lot. Is afraid of a lot of things and especially being left alone in the dark, technically a genius but most say he doesn't even bother using that big brain of his. Loves music and animals, always tries to help and occasionally actually does but mostly Raphael accidentally makes things worse. Polite and stumbles with his words a lot. Loves food which leads to the question of how he isn't fat. he's pretty clumsy but when something falls on him it'll still bring a smile to your face.History
Raised in Dublith by his mother and father, Raphael had a older brother Leonardo and older sister Catherine. his father was more machine than man having been in a accident several years back when he was a State Alchemist, every limb was auto-mail but still worked hard as a farmer. They were very poor and tried very hard to make money, Raphael learned how to play the violin and sat outside everyday playing a old violin on the street outside his house. As he grew older Raphael's older brother Leonardo started to teach his alchemy, like most things Raphael became obsessed with it and was always reading and studying it but Leonardo was always better. He soon acquired a job playing his violin at the local pub, people were amazed to see this 12 year old child playing like a professional. One day he decided to make a gift for his Father for his birthday, he proudly made a perfect bust of his fathers head and rushed home to give him the gift. When he reached his house a crowd of people were around it, smiling as always he simply thought everyone was there to wish his father a happy birthday but sadly he was wrong. Leonardo had killed their parents and gravely wounded his sister in a attempt of human transmutation . With tears running down his face Raphael ran away. Out in the country side he found his brother casually walking down the road with the cruelest smile on his face, Raphael was terrified of him, Leonardo said five words only "Get me when your ready" then Raphael fainted. Several years later at 16 he had practically learned everything about alchemy, still working at the pub playing music to earn enough money to hopefully be able to buy a auto-mail leg for his older sister, Raphael decided to take action and went to central with his sister and took the state alchemist exam. He almost failed but passed thankfully, he had made a slender suit of armor in a split second
but secretly he thinks it was because of his fathers record which allowed him to pass. Currently whenever he works he always uses his suit of armor to fight, it makes him feel safe and brave. His sister owns a small Inn in town which she was able to buy with help from Raphael, they make a decent enough living and Catherine refuses to get auto-mail for reasons Raphael will never understand. two other people work there, twins named Sally and Sarah. Raphael is working most of the time as a state alchemist mostly since he doesn't have anything else to do.
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Roleplay Example
The sun shone brightly as Raphael wandered around the town, he was looking for a nice place to take a seat and maybe play his violin a little. Smiling and waving at people as they walked by politely, Glancing over at a fruit vendors stand he saw a kid snatch one "hey!" the fruit vendor shouted "don't worry i'll get him!" Raphael quickly said chasing after the boy through the maze of alleyways. After several minutes Raphael caught him at a dead end "oh come on, you have to pay for that" Raphael said with a tired smile, the kid did the unexpected and through the fruit beaming Raphael in the forehead then caught the fruit and ran away while he was still in shock "...i did not see that one coming" Raphael said in disbelief blinking his eyes, walking back rubbing his forehead Raphael gave the fruit vendor money for the stolen fruit then continued in the direction he originally was walking -yikes... that could've really have gone better- Raphael thought with a grin as he walked. He decided to stop near the side of the road then popped open the instrument case and picked up the violin and started to play a cheerful tune skillfully -i love this ratty old violin... i could make it better but why ruin a good thing- Raphael thought
About Yourself
Name:...i'm sorry i don't feel comfortable enough to tell you my name yet.
Gender: Male
RP Experience: 1 year, almost 2
Activity: i get on about everyday of the week unless something important comes up
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