Rin Amore

[rin]

The Basics

Name:Rin Amore
Alias:(OOC:none until she passes the alchemist exam)
Age:17
Gender:Female
Siblings:None that she knows of, but she’s had lots of foster siblings if that counts.

Rank:She’s an Alchemist and she’s in the military, but she hasn’t become a state alchemist, yet.

Appearance

Height: 164.592 cm
Weight: 145.
Rin’s known for basically her chest. It’s oversized. Her hair is long and is tied into a very high ponytail. Thought it still reaches her back, well waist.. Her two hanging bangs are both uneven in length. The right one cups her face, while the left one caresses her shoulder. Her right eye in some light maybe black or yellow. It is almost black,(Or dull gold) but there is indeed a lot of love inside that orb. Her left eye is missing, its covered by an eye patch. Her left hand is automail, her right is normal.She’s always smiling, even though she has full lips. Once in a red moon will she frown. Her skin is brown, but not too brown… like a dark caramel color.

Personality

Rin is very happy go lucky for someone who has had to move from home to home. She’s loves acting as a big sister to kids who have no older siblings. She’s one of those people who you can call a push over until it’s serious. If that happened then you would go away with your feelings, or body, hurt. She can take a good joke, but if it hurts someone she’ll “joke” back tenfold. She doesn’t really like anyone frowning, especially kids, so she’ll find something to make them happy. Though if you try to put her in a mini skirt, you’ll most likely be kicked a few meters back.

History

Rin doesn’t have any memories of her birth mother. She doesn’t even know if she has any siblings what so ever. She was put in an orphanage and traveled from home to home. She barely even remembers that. If she doesn’t, its all a blur to her. Some people wonder how she came across Alchemy. That isn’t a hard thing to figure out to be honest. She found it out when she was with her last family. Her mother and Father both knew it and used it to amaze her and teach her. Her father even taught her how to draw the transmutation circle. It took her forever to make it perfect.

All of this was just a few years ago. Funny, that’s before her ”mother” and Father” died. Well her real ones anyway. Her foster mother and father, Ren(Lotus) and Bara(Rose) died one night. Theirs wasn’t a natural cause though. They were murdered by an alchemist them selves. Rin was asleep when she hear the sounds of transmutation taking affect. She got out of her bed and tip toed to the room. She saw that Bara was on the wall. Her head had been smashed him and her chest was slashed open. Rin almost if not cried.

She looked around for Ren when she saw a hole in the wall. She walked through the room and saw Ren drawing various transmutation circles. He looked like he was fending someone off. She stepped cautiously and peeked out the wall. She felt something cross her cheek and she saw Ren look at her. He yelled for her to go back and stay there. She shook her head and drew a transmutation circle herself. She saw Ren come towards her, but she also saw something going towards him. She pressed both hands on the circle and formed a wall to protect him.

She heard a laugh and a feminine voice comment on her reflexes. She also said that Rin had to die, she’d interfered and seem too much. She saw a black pencil like thing coming towards her and it looked sharp. She suddenly saw a body block her own and blood squirt from it. If anyone could see her eyes, they would have been wide with fear and worry. She felt the body fall side ways and saw that it was Ren. He couldn’t help what came next. She cried. He cried as much as time would allow, which was long as Roy came minutes after. Well seconds really. Rin saw that the other person had left her with Ren’s corpse. Ron said a few kind things to her and she took them happily. He just looked so cool through her eyes. She recognized his uniform. It was a military one. She didn’t have anywhere else to do and well, going back to the orphanage was out of the question. SO she decided to join the military. She was sure she could put her skills to good use. But she didn’t leave her Okaa-san and her Otou-san behind… She buried them and she wears Ren’s “choker” and Bara’s Bracelet.
Human transmutation… That was and still is an interesting subject fp her. She bets no one would have ever guessed that she tried it at one point… It was for a friend. Her little brother died. So being the nice older sibling she was, she tried to bring him back. So she drew a transmutation circle outside and put in the brother’s body.

She explained that they needed something of equal exchange for his soul and her friend nodded. She went and got a dog. Something was nagging Rin to not let that be it, but her friend was so insistent on it… So she let it be. She put it in the circle with the boy’s body and she pressed her hands on it. They watched as the lights danced in the night sky. Everything seemed to be going in the right direction, but it was going horribly wrong. The dog and the body fused into one being and barked a growled at them. The worse part was that it wasn’t even half way done.

Her friend cried and ran into the circle. Rin tried to pull her back, but if she did the two beings would have died once more. If she tried to separate it…She stopped her process of thinking. Why was her heart felt like it was being pulled right out of her chest?! She saw that this thing(which was once her friends, the little brother, and a dog) was yanking at her chest. She panicked and she honestly tried to finish what she’d started, but she couldn’t. With her heart nearly stopping she pushed down on the Circle and made to destroy it. She felt her heart being pulled again before she saw it rise up and melt(in a sense).

Yep, she killed her friend and brother and a dog. She didn’t mean to, but she looked into a book to see what she had done wrong. She hadn’t equally exchanged the souls… But she didn’t lose anything… Did she? Not her heart, or an arm or a leg… Not her brain so what? She pulled her shirt and looked down and saw a rose shaped scar on her chest. Apparently this was set never to heal… How had she not noticed it? Not only was there a scar, but her left eye, and her left hand were gone. Once lost, It couldn’t be put back right? So she was stuck it a rose on her chest until she could figure out what she’d done wrong….Maybe even bring back the three souls she took and ruined.

Pictures

By me: none

By Others: Yoruichi/Bleach

Roleplay Example

Rin’s smiled twitched. She couldn’t believe Ron of all people had just made her wear a mini skirt. She appreciated him for taking her in and every thing, but COME ON! He of all people knew that she dreaded the thing! It was unthinkable that she wore it! It was so short that if she even leaned forward someone would have a view of her.

“Ron-san. Is that really necessary?” She asked.
She looked up at him as he laughed. Her body jerked forward as he clasped her on the back. She laughed back, but this one was one of those, “Try it again and I kill you” laughs. She wouldn’t really kill Ron. She respected him too much. Beat him to near death, maybe but not kill. A breeze came in from the window she was standing to the right of. She could feel the fabric rise. Out of pure reflex, or so she says, she punched Ron’s desk and left and impression. She was not in the mood for this joke.

About Yourself

Name: D, Dog, Beastress, kuku-kun/chan
Gender: Female
RP Experience: For FMA none, others about a yearActivity: As active as I can be. Crazy life.

Extras: Alchemy Description:Rin’s style is a free style type. She doesn’t have a favorite type of alchemy. She uses whatever she can to the situation she’s in. If she had to pick her top used Alchemy it would be protection.

Rin draws Transmutation circles, but she does have to. She doesn’t want Roy to find out yet, but she can use it without the use of a circle. This can be tricky though as she’s still working on it. She has to put one(for half the damage or affect) or both(For full damage or affect) hands on her heart. She can only do it as soon as a heart beat comes to pass. This could take some time in some situations though. A second maybe too long.

Likes: Guys, alchemy, easy going people, casual clothes, her power, having fun~
Dislikes: Having to do a lot of work, strict people, mini skirts, heels and cats
Strengths: Loyalty, she really is strong to be a girl, She’s good at making do with what she has,
Weaknesses: she’s too blunt, she’s too loyal at times, she’s clueless at times, she’s also oblivious(Sometimes), if you push all the wrong buttons, she’ll lose control(a little) or a lot.
Fears: spiders, death, gory sites, dying, creepy guys
Goals: to become better at her alchemy

[Edward Elric]

Hello, first off, the staff would like to thank you for being interested in the site and applying in the first place! However, I'm afraid at this moment we cannot accept your application. We are willing, generally, to overlook grammatical and spelling errors as we are in this application as well as others, but there has to be some changes made to the history before we can accept your character. I'm simply hear to point out the most glaring errors and ask that you please fix them to the best of your ability.

Number one is a big pet peeve of mine, also, it is rather unrealistic for an OC. The being that your character knows and is, apparently, rather close to Roy Mustang. In most cases it is improper for an OC to have a lot of prior interaction with a Canon because canon's histories are already known. It is not an issue that your character has joined the military, nor the she had specific interest taken in her by high ranking officer, nonetheless it should not be a canon character. Roy Mustang has a canon-specified staff and the one's in it are also canon, unfortunately your OC does not fit into that mold. If you would like your character to meet and get to know a canon in actual roleplay time, that is fine with the owner and moderators but is also up to the person roleplaying that canon character.

Number two would be human transmutation. While it is certainly not a complete impossibility for an OC the rules of this site state that for all non-canon characters the gate can only be seen during IC RP and with good reason. Also, while we do occasionally make exceptions on that rule, if you character had seen the gate it is highly unlikely all it left was an un-healing scar. It took Al's whole body and Ed's arm and leg, it took Izumi's organs and as clearly seen in CoS it literally ate a man for trying.

Number three refers to the extra information section in which you have explained her ability to use alchemy without circles. Unfortunately, it is improper due to an error in canon-to-OC crossover. I will admit there were never any exacts on how exactly a character gains the ability to use alchemy without a circle but there is an accepted canon fashion in which they are able to after they have seen the gate. Edward saw the gate and discovered he could use alchemy without a circle via clapping his hands together, his Master/Teacher Izumi experienced the same phenomena, we see once or twice both Dante and Hohenheim using the same technique. It seems to be the accepted way and is even explained by the fact that clapping forms a circle out of the users' body.

Of course that is all a moot point if your character has not seen the gate.

We are willing to work with you and your character if you still wish to RP with us, we would still love to see you join the site!

[rin]

Better? Sorry about the Roy thing. I was trying to type "ron" but Roy kept popping up in my mind. As for the grammatical issues, I think my com is just dumb. Its not picking anything up. And Don't worry. It takes alot for me to give up on a profile. I will not quit. Besides, the site looks fun.

[Edward Elric]

Yes, thank you for clarifying that^^ but there still is the issue but the transmutation circles and history of human transmutation still needs work.